Heart Turns to Blue
By Angel of Death
Chorus
Faded dreams turn into vivid memories
When all my joys become my miseries
Life through my eyes turn a different hue
When my heart turns to blue
Verse 1
I tried painting my heart today
When I finished, my canvas was full of gray
And the colors on my palette were too
I tried to paint the joy in my soul
But my paintbrush let the pain unfold
My white canvas turned into gray and black
All of this was because of you
This is what happens when...
Chorus
Faded dreams turn into vivid memories
When all my joys become my miseries
Life through my eyes turn a different hue
When my heart turns to blue
Verse 2
My emotional gallery
Contains whats inside of me
When I was with you
My heart never was this shade of blue
You made me feel the rainbow
Sometimes you made my heart feel indigo
Then you left me that note on my bed
You made me feel all types of red
You took back all the "I love yous" you ever said
I threw away all my colors
And bought black and grey to replace the others
I did this all because of you
You made me feel blue
This is what happens when...
Chorus
Faded dreams turn into vivid memories
When all my joys became my miseries
Life through my eyes turn a different hue
When my heart turns to blue
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This seems sort of repetitives. I liked it, but it seems way too repetitive.
My suggestion would be to add more verses.
another thing is that the second verse doesn't seem to flow. but...idk. Lol. I just think it doesn't seem to flow. My opinion though.
Besides thoughs, I loved the meaning behind it. I loved the metaphor! Such an amazing picture!
Hope this helped.
Jamie
I love this Angel, you were brillant! You're not forcing the rythem or the ryme I'm really proud of you. This piece is perfect. You put alot of emotion into it and it's not ignored I love this piece and I think this would win a blue ribbon, just don't sell this to Brittney Spears lol. This is really wonderful.
Your friend, as always
-Max
I'm not quite sure how this would be sang. I've been trying to hum a tune for it that fits? fast slow? i cant quite get it right. And melody?
Overall, I really liked this. I was, however, a bit confused. The main premise is that your heart is now blue, but in the first verse, you imply that your heart is grey and black. Which is it?
Keep writing!
I guess it could be Pop or R&B but I guess I was leaning towards Pop. This came to me for in my head one day I just start singing it.
What genre is this song? Pop, R&B, Country, what?